tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3933499347286243939.post8987143723894545496..comments2023-10-08T06:03:17.304-07:00Comments on Tung's web log.: Story Dev HW 1Tung Nguyenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00118159200391081006noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3933499347286243939.post-31979613587932211172011-06-10T20:06:22.882-07:002011-06-10T20:06:22.882-07:00"Empty your mind on the paper" is good a..."Empty your mind on the paper" is good advice. Thanks!Tung Nguyenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00118159200391081006noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3933499347286243939.post-2398839976508393662011-06-10T19:41:05.377-07:002011-06-10T19:41:05.377-07:00Thanks for the help, guys. Mmmkay, I'll work o...Thanks for the help, guys. Mmmkay, I'll work on the design. Cody, I'm actually thinking of making him comical, soooooo... but I wonder if he should look serious so that it's funnier when the gags happen...Tung Nguyenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00118159200391081006noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3933499347286243939.post-46239203265736775492011-06-10T18:53:39.034-07:002011-06-10T18:53:39.034-07:00SO MUCH LIKE VIEWTIFUL JOE!!! The above comments a...SO MUCH LIKE VIEWTIFUL JOE!!! The above comments are true: try developing different superhero designs and proportions and not just focusing on one design. Explore, Tung!! I know you're capable becuz I remember seeing all those different designs of your fire-bender guy (forgot his name; srry!!). Your line-work is really NICE and is improving :)Christina M.https://www.blogger.com/profile/10015137979554180560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3933499347286243939.post-86714627477070939952011-06-10T07:39:41.159-07:002011-06-10T07:39:41.159-07:00His proportions and sillouette are too similar to ...His proportions and sillouette are too similar to viewtiful joe. I agree with Cody, do some silouette thumnails (let's say 20) and choose one logically based on what kind of character he is. Honestly I like the idea of and internet cop, that would scare the crap out of most people hahah.Chris Ybarrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04172013745109744479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3933499347286243939.post-83656806208738087562011-06-10T03:38:55.601-07:002011-06-10T03:38:55.601-07:00he does look a lot like viewtiful joe...you should...he does look a lot like viewtiful joe...you should develop lots and lots of characters instead of just drawing only one and sticking to just that. empty your mind on the paper. I dont know what your character has to do with youtube as well. i understand hes sort of a cop, but an internet cop?? Also, if hes supose to be like batman i suggest you make his entrance more subtle. dont think batman or robocop would burst out in a pose and would be this short. he looks to comical. hope that helps!Codyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08718101805203589553noreply@blogger.com